December Nights

i like your story it is very good. I'm not just saying that either. i like your vocabulary in it and the way you say that even though the smoke ...

oh my. I love this, I can feel the tears falling on the paper. Oh it reminds me of my friend who's dad abuses her and her sister. It kinda ...

What? what are you talking about? I don't get it. It seems like all different types of subjects thrown in a blender, no offense.